Thursday, 8 December 2011

` 1. EXT. PLAYGROUND(1996). DAY


 the story starts with 3 boys picking on one(the three boys name boy 1: john 2:jimmy boy 3:Hdot victim: jason ) they hurt him and torture him and try to take his money everyday then one day he leaves school and is never heard of again not even by his parents.

John: yo there he is

Hdot: lets get him

Jimmy: oi what did u say about my mum

jason: please leave me alone i didn't talk about anyone's mum

John: don't lie
( gets punched in the face )

(jimmy pull out knife)
jimmy: tell me!!!!

Jason: look what ever i done im sorry
( he gets beaten up this time and they run off after )


 2. INT. APARTMENT(2011). NIGHT


15 years later when their older 2 of the boys still know each other(Hdot and Jimmy)they watch the news and see that jason is on the news and has previously been on the news for 12 murders both boys look at each other with fear in their eyes

(15 years later)

Hdot: you got to stop sniffing that stuff and get a job

John: i will man

Hdot: when?!

John: when you get me an x box

(t.v news is on about Jason he is on the loose and has escaped)

t.v presenter: he left a letter behind saying "its time for the revenge i deserved along time ago you know who you are P.S im going to kill you to my friends in school." be advised if you see him please contact the police immediately!


3. INT/EXT. RESTAURANT/ALLEY(2011). NIGHT


John the business man does not know that the boy they bullied is on the loose and the other 2 do, the killer goes and attempts to kill the one whose rich but he cannot get into his mansion because there are body guards there he waits there for a bit and sees that hes going out on a date with some girl they go to a restaurant and he goes for a smoke she joins him in the alley john goes and kills them both

jimmy: babes are you you ready

shaniqua: yes nearly Hun

(she comes down stairs and twirls)

jimmy: looking sexy

shaniqua: i better be, lets go

(at the dinner place)

Jimmy: im going for a quick fag ill be back

shaniqua: no ill join you

(they both go out but shaniqua leads the way)

(Jimmy abandons shaniqua and goes to the toilet)

(as soon as she opens the door she is greeted by constant stabs to her heart)

jimmy: shaniqua what happened

(jimmy is also stabbed but suffer a slow death because he is stabbed in the neck)

Jason: bye (grins)
 4. INT/EXT. HIGHWAY/AIRPORT(2011).  NIGHT


after a while the other pair find out their friends dead so the pack their bags and try to move to Russia but the killer goes to the air port and spots one of them heading to the toilet and follows him John is on the toilet gets out looks in the mirror gets down to wash his face but when he looks back his face is slashed out blood splats everywhere.

(at the airport)

john: how long left

Hdot: i think about 10 minutes

john: fuck that im going toilet

Hdot: watch out

john: okay man im not 3!

john comes out of the toilet looking stressed goes down washed his face but when he comes back up suffer the exact same death as jimmy)
5. INT. AIRPORT/AIRPLANES(2011). NIGHT


Hdot  goes into the bathroom and looks around he sees that john is dead and runs for the airplane jason just about to get him but he gets away goes in the airplane and starts a new life in Russia but 3 months later jason comes back and kills him at work

Hdot: john, john, oh shit

(Hdot sees jason behind him, jason goes for a big grab but misses by an inch Hdot run on to the airplane)

Jason: bye john, Hdot ill see you next time

(3 months later Hdot is working)

manager: hey harry (Hdot) go get the drill form the storage

Hdot: what ever you say boss

(Hdot goes to the back and gets the drill plunged into his neck and comes out of the other side, jason laughs in a crazy tone)

Jason: bye harry!!

(starts to laugh in a crazy tone again)

THE END

Thursday, 17 November 2011

Establish shot
an establish is used to set the scene of the location of the story or it may be set in a past
Close-up shot
a close-up shot is a shot that frames a person or object in crucial moments
Medium shot
a medium shot is a shot that lets you see the persons whole body or just up until the knees
Long shot
a long shot shows a shot from far angle in which the object or person is standing
Tracking shot
a tracking shot follows the object or person if they are currently moving in different places
Aerial shot
an aerial shot is shot from a very high position so the people who watch get a full view on whats happening
Dolly shot
a dolly shot is put on a dolly and moved around(not necessarily on the action)
Handheld shot
a handheld shot is a shot that is shot from the directors hands sometimes can be a little shaky

Report: Sarah jane adventures

i think the way it is written and layed out and it includes INT/EXT it also includes different type of camera shot because if it was the same camera view it would'nt look as much effective they have added fix shots and others they also have a gap after everyone talks this makes it easier for the actors because they have time to remember their lines and also have time to catch a breath in case they have to talk again this is much easier for the actor and more effective as a episode because there might be a climax climax means the crucial part in a episode or movie.

Wednesday, 16 November 2011

does social networking break down communities or develop them

Pros

  • Would be easy to research the arab spring
  • Gives chance to do an interactive documentary
  • Different types of websites used to communicate such as Facebook, Twitter and BBM which would go with our topic
  • would be easy to get interviews with people who use Facebook or Twitter
Cons
  • copyrights
  • people might not know what Arab spring is
  • would be very hard to interview someone who took part in london riots
Our target audience is young people age 12-16 people that have been affected by it people that have gained an advantage by it
The purpose of this is to uncover the truth of social networking

primary research?
the primary research we are doing is we are going to ask a number of people if they use facebook and ask them if their communities are developed by Facebook

 secondary research?
we will go on google and see if there is any previous information or interview on anything about facebook



Thursday, 10 November 2011

  • What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname? Jermaine jigger/jack the ripper jr
  • How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?diffrent ages
  • What is their date of birth? unknown
  • What is their place of birth? Iceland
  • Are they male or female? Male
  • Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed? Widower
  • Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? no
  • What is your character's overall health like? unknown
  • What type of personality does your character have?dark personality
  • What is their Ethnic background and religion?unknown
  • What is their current occupation? serial killer
  • What level of education does your character have? unknown
  • What does your character like or love? killing the innocence
  • What does your character dislike or hate? rich people who cut trees down to make amuzement park or shopping centre
  • where is your characters best holiday? Jamaica

Wednesday, 9 November 2011

design proposal

i think my documentary of Facebook and how it is dangerous will be a good idea because there will be many reasons because there have been many victims of people getting bullied over Facebook the most dangerous type of people on Facebook is peodophiles there are many people who get blackmailed by peodophiles and sometimes end up dead. On the other hand Facebook is a fun site for teenangers when are board or sometimes to play games online

Thursday, 3 November 2011

watched: Merlin:the wicked day
URL:http://www.bbc.co.uk/iplayer/episode/b01692qr/Merlin_Series_4_The_Wicked_Day/
just recently i have watched Merlin: the wicked day and it has made me change my idea and improve it because my story is not in much detail and i do not know the location of where my story is going to be set i am also going to extend the size of the script because my story is too small

i am going to improve by setting a location based on my story because if my stories a horror which it is i will set it mostly in the night in a grave yard or a abandon house but it will be hard to find one i will also bring the mystery straight in because it can not be that long it can only be five minutes max

Thursday, 20 October 2011

My Story Line

the story starts with 3 boys picking on one they hurt him and torture him and try to take his money everyday and then when their older 2 of the boys still know each other and one of them becomes a big business man but then the boy they pick on is missing because he has killed over 12 people and the 2 boys that live with each other are nervous!!

the business man does not know that the boy they bullied is on the loose and the other 2 do, the killer goes and attempts to kill the one whos rich but he cannot get into his mansion because there are body guards there he waits there for a bit and sees that hes going out on a date with some girl and kills both of them

after a while the other pair find out their friends dead so the pack their bags and try to move to Russia but the killer goes to the air port and kills one while he is having a toilet break he attempts to kill the other one but he gets away and goes to Russia.

Wednesday, 5 October 2011

Finding a story


How do consoles affect kids sharpness and hand-eye co-ordination?
I have chosen this because some people I know have very good sharpness but also play video games and are very good at them and others who do not play are not very co-ordinated
Does the movie 4 lions attract more people to terrorism?
The movie 4 lions is a top rated movie but is about terrorist and why people should not become 1 but some people do not listen to the words and get influenced into the terrorism this concerns lots of people especially the community
Facebook, is it made for cyber bullying?
Most Facebook users use to be friendly but now Facebook has been destroyed by bullies, theifs and robbers. 1 of 3 people get bullied on facebook the worst cause is peodophiles they bribe and blackmail kids into sending them inappropriate pictures